A Shining Dawn/Mistakes

The book A Shining Dawn is long, so there are bound to be mistakes. I did not go through and edit, so this page lists some of the mistakes in the book.
 * On page 1, Flamestripe is called just a dark ginger tom, without a stripe.
 * On page 1, Gingersplash is called ginger, when she is ginger-and-white.
 * On page 6, it says, 'She prodded Fallenoak, who was started to dose off' instead of 'She prodded Fallenoak, who had started to doze off'.
 * On page 6, Ebonypaw says, 'Your welcome' instead of 'You're welcome'.
 * On page 8, Brindlewing says, 'Are you here to clean are nests?' instead of 'Are you here to clean our nests?'
 * On page 10, it says, 'Her mentor nodded, and bounded over to wear Moonstar was crouched on the Sun Boulders' instead of 'Her mentor nodded, and bounded over to where Moonstar was crouched on the Sun Boulders'.
 * On page 11, it says, 'The sound they made well being crushed' instead of 'The sound they made while being crushed'.
 * On page 11, it says, 'She told them, backed out of the den' instead of 'She told them, then backed out of the den'.
 * On page 11, tail-tip is spelt like 'tail tip' instead of 'tail-tip'.